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Wed, Aug. 27th, 2003, 01:09 pm

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<sub<center>___When you're left with only a bullet
I'll bring the trigger and a promise to pull it
I'll be the end of everyone who's ever entered your life
And take the pieces out of it.
I'll give you enough time to regain your composure
To reconstruct a heart that's torn apart from overexposure
I know forever isn't long enough to forget the faces and places
...that played out your tragedy___</center></sub>

Sat, Sep. 27th, 2003 07:26 pm (UTC)

its well written I will give you that.
but in some places its a little repetitive, like most emo/hardcore whatever songs.
But to sum it up, i think you did a good job.